Magic Realism First Two Paragraphs

     Crash!! "Mmmmmmmmmmmpph!!!!!!" shrieks Alfred the hungover mummy. Late to work to his job at Mummy Headquarters, Alfred bangs his head on the top of the old elevator door entrance in the old Lowe's warehouse where his temple was built under.
     Waking up late with his shirt on backwards, a 5 o'clock shadow, and grease stains on his outfit, Alfred looks at the remainder of what looked like his temple room as the elevator doors close in on him. As he slowly opens and closes his eyes, Alfred thinks to himself, "What happened last night?"

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  1. not sure if I did this correct but hear is the first two paragraphs on my story about a mummy with a severe hangover waking up in an elevator in an old building.

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